The first attribute one has to consider are the reasons for why Robin Hood and Beowulf are fighting for the poor. In these aspect, they do differ, as one is acting without self-interest while the other is not. Robin Hood's reasons is to fight the injustice that is coming from the ruling class. Due to this reason, his main deed is in capturing treasures and giving the money to the poor. He therefore does not act out of self-interest, but for justice. Beowulf on the other hand seems to have other objectives. At the beginning of the story, Beowulf is already famous for fighting sea monsters and creatures of other kinds. This makes him proud and it becomes evident that he seeks immortality. Then, as he hears that Grendel is terrorizing the Danish people he immediately sails of to help them. Throughout the whole story though, it seems like his immortality is his number one priority. This makes it questionable that he is fighting Grendel just to help the Danes. Further, after Beowulf has eliminated Grendel and Grendel's mother, he receives a great treasure, which he takes back home. Therefore, one is able to conclude that Beowulf is acting mostly out of self-interest and not selfishness like Robin Hood. Even though, the two differ in this aspect, it is evidence that they are protecting the weaker and therefore doing good.
In the second paragraph I want to discuss the different ways in which Robin Hood and Beowulf are helping the weaker. I want to touch upon that Beowulf has supernatural strength, while Robin Hood has intelligence.
After analyzing Robin Hood and Beowulf one can see many similarities, especially in the main theme. To begin with, both of them are typical heroes, and fight for a specific reason, so the overall picture is identical. When examining the two stories closer though, one will find two major differences that set Robin Hood and Beowulf apart. First, the two of them fight for different motives, as Robin Hood is clearly helping the poor in a selfish manner, while Beowulf takes his actions with self-interest. Secondly, Robin Hood and Beowulf differ in their approach to fight for the poor. Evidently, Robin Hood is relatively weak compared to Beowulf, as he as no supernatural strength, but has other skills like his intelligence and that enable him to be just as effective. Even though the two are set apart though these two aspects, one can conclude that Robin Hood and Beowulf have similar roles in their societies, as they are great leaders and help the weak.
You have a strong opening statement in your first paragraph. You work hard to outline both similarities and differences in the characters. By doing so you perhaps make a few too many points all in the opening paragraph. This could have been broken up. I like the reinforced sense of purpose in your introduction to the second paragraph. You make a good closing statement.
ReplyDeleteI like that you clearly state your goal to analyze the similarities and differences between Beowulf and Robin Hood. However, I would suggest saving the specifics of the similarities and differences you talk about in your introduction for later paragraphs. Additionally, I think using the word "theme" to characterize the similarities between the two heros in the introduction would benefit the overall clarity of your essay. Otherwise, great draft!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comments above, taking some of the details out and moving them to a different paragraph would make it more of an introduction. But i really like the details you found so definitely find somewhere else in your paper to put them. But great ideas!
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